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Here's to what we used to have
  and guarding doors at the lav.
Here's to dinner after midnight
  and to how we would rarely fight.
Here's to the games we used to play
  and to the sorrows we drank away.
Here's to all the smoking we would do
  and to how we used to stick like glue.
Here's to all the movies watched
  and to all the plans we botched.
Here's to secrets that we shared
  and to how no one else cared.
Here's to the hours of watching cable TV
  and to the talk of our non-virginity.
Here's to all our inside jokes
  and to all the playful pokes.
Here's to merely two hours of sleep
  right before the working week.
Here's to hugging for no reason
  or to heal an emotional lesion.
Here's to crying from sadness
  and to crying from happiness.
So at last,
  Here's to you;
  Here's to me;
  Here's to us
  and our past.
I miss spending time with my friends that left or stayed when I left or who are physically close but have wandered away from me emotionally. I love you Kody , Andy and Amy!
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forbiddensnowflake Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2005
I think you need to break this up into separate stanzas.
poems are really hard to read when they have no breaks in my opinion, but besides that I think it's generally I good piece.
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WarriorPoet Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2005
Interesting, I've never seen one just quite like this. I love original styles like yours.

D-Chan
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honnelore Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2005
Thanks!
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scamper Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2005
A very personal piece obviously.

It inspires me about my friendships I currently have...
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MTLV Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
I actually thought this was a good concept giving a toast to things in the past kind of unique. some of my friends drifted away as well so I can relate to how hard that can be.
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honnelore Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2005
It is sad when that happens.
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LittleO Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2005
That's something people love ^_^ Reminiscing :)
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humors Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
Love this alot. The meaning.

Love it.
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honnelore Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2005
Thank you so much! :)
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KateHughes Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2005  Professional Photographer
i can really relate to this :)
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honnelore Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2005
Friends are the best!!! Thanks.
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pepponen Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2005
This was kind of poetry I would write (if I had any friends :p ). I sincerely like this, it is festive and sympathetic at the same time. :)
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honnelore Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2005
Thank you so much.
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pedrocastro Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, this reminds me of New Years... shame it just too small though.
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honnelore Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005
Are you talking about the picture? 'Cause that isn't the submission. It's the poem. But thanks for the comment.
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zebravissimo Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005  Professional
Very nice, quite deep and it really radiates a sense of emotion :)
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honnelore Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005
Thank you so much.
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andrewmar Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005  Professional Digital Artist
thats great! he poem goes really well the the pic
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honnelore Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
Thank you so much!
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GnRbasketCaSe Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2005  Hobbyist Photographer
i like this....
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honnelore Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2005
Thanks.
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Hashpipe Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2005   Photographer
wow, great. Keep up the good work
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honnelore Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2005
Thank you.
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trumpfass Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2005  Professional Interface Designer
very good & fitting pic for a good writing :)
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honnelore Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2005
Thanks.
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EeveeBlaze Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2005
Out of all your pics, for some reason I like this one the best^^ The poem adds even more feeling to it. Good job.
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honnelore Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2005
Thank you!
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TBorge Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2005  Student Digital Artist
Makes me very thirsty.
So refreshing
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honnelore Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2005
Haha!!! I wish I had some champagne!!! :)
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sammygirl333 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2005
what can i say, but amazing, you capture the true art of getting drunk.
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honnelore Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2005
Well, thank you very much! :D
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joiyua Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2005  Student General Artist
Very well written. I like that it begins the same all the time :)
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honnelore Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2005
Thank you so much! I like repetitive writings, so I thought I would give it a try... :)
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YellowEleven Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2005  Professional Photographer
lots of emotion. wonderful piece! keep it up!!
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honnelore Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2005
Thanks!
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swing-doll Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2005   Photographer
aw cute. shows a lot of feeling :) I like.
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honnelore Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2005
Thank you!!! :)
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