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my suggestion for you is to flesh it out more... describe the feeling more than just saying what it feels like.
like the part where you say it is beautiful as a dove... in what ways are they similar?
thats my
great job!
D-Chan
Oh my.... as in pity myself...
god.... love can kill you true!!!